High Rolling 19's Application

Gang Name: High Rolling 19's

Ranks: 1. Initiate
2. Acolyte
3. Speaker of The Order
4. Holy Priest
5. Prophet of The Order


Story: Well I lived with my brother who is called John Jones we live Next door to each other we loved each other as friends. But Once I went to his house to walk to school. He's Mom called Sandra called him once but no Answer. five minutes later he was called again but again no answer. So I said to his mom ''Ill go upstairs to see him''. I walked up the dusty staircase with a creak and I walked to the end of the corridor. Opening the door slowly, As I opened the door I noticed Pills lying on the white stylish floor. I screamed as I saw John hanging on the rope. I screamed to Sandra 'SHIT' Sandra ran up the stairs grabbing a pair of scissors Trying to cut the ropes. But It was too Late.

Edits required
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No RP is shown, and requirements don't appear to be met; for instance theres not even a rank name for r6!

You have 24 hours to make the required edits, before your application is auto-denied.

Denied.
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The applicant has failed to make the required edits in the allotted amount of time. Please wait seven days before applying again, or face permanent denial from making family applications and being slot holder.

Best Regards,
Evan Abagail